Based on the author's response to the reviewers, I encourage the authors to submit a revised version taking into account the comments of the two reviewers.

As the revised version doesn't include track changes, it is not easy to see what changes have been made relative to the initial submission. Please submit a revised version with track changes. In the meantime, I suggest the authors to consider the following comments:

1. Small errors in English appear quite frequent, for example in Abstract: Line 1 should be "It has long been recognized", Line 4 "demonstrate", Line 7 "are revealed", etc. There seems also a broken sentence on Page 8, Line 15. Please read carefully the manuscript to correct language errors.

2. In the Introduction part: The research questions and objectives are not well pronounced. please make them more clear. There are many small paragraphs which seem to me lack of focus. I would suggest to group different small paragraphs into one if they serve for the same purpose.

3. Section 2 is quite heavy. It would be helpful to have several sub-sections or separate the results of climate simulations and the description of model and experiments.

I still find some small grammar errors. please read your manuscript carefully and try to avoid this kind of errors.
Page 10 ,line 14: (Fig.5a) during this interglacial (An, 2000, Sun et al., 2010a)?
Page 10, line 20: it shows clearly the weakening of ....?
page 10, line 26: during this interglacial period

Please change the reference Yin and Berger, 2011 to 2012.

According to the regulation of Copernicus Publications, "Authors are therefore requested to deposit data (and other materials underpinning the findings presented in their publication) in a FAIR-aligned repository, to cite data (and other underlying materials) in their article with a corresponding reference in the reference list, and to include a data availability statement in their manuscript on how their underlying research data can be accessed", the manuscript is missing a data availability section. Please add such a section in your manuscript.