Dear Dr. Osmont,
Thank you for the detailed response to the reviewers comments. Please include them in your revised manuscript. In particular (if not considered yet), please include 1) the new figure from your response to the manuscript (in the main text or as a supplement; 2) your response concerning local and regional burned vegetation type; 3) your explanation in response to the comment P2/L13.
Please include a marked-up manuscript version showing the changes made in your revision.
Best regards,
Anne-Laure Daniau
Editor

Dear Dr. Osmont,
Thank you for your revised manuscript. Before final publication, I have very few minor corrections:
- Abstract: line 25 please change “global trend” to read “global biomass burning reconstructions based on charcoal data” – and same for the conclusion section Line 36.
- Please introduce the new figure -- Fig 1 included in your response, covering the period 1730-1999 -- in the main text or as a SI figure) to support for your correlation number line45 in section 3.3 (I didn’t find it in the revised manuscript).
- Please remove the last sentences (Line 38-42) of the conclusion section concerning the preservation of the glaciers as this is not directly linked with your work contribution.
The manuscript is publishable after these technical corrections.
Best regards,
Anne-Laure Daniau