Dear Authors,

Many thanks for your responses to the various reviews of your pape. Having read the comments from the reviewers, and your responses, the paper is accepted subject to minor revisions. I ask that you undertake the changes outlined and resubmit your paper for "review by editor". In order for this to be undertaken smoothly, it would help if you could highlight where you have made changes to the original manuscript (e.g. using track changes) as well as submitting a clean copy for a final read through. These 2 versions can be in the same file. The track changes just allows me to follow the changes in response to authors, especially at this stage as changes to the original manuscript can offset the original line numbers. If you have already made changes and are not able to include the track changes, please do not worry - it will just take me a little longer to go through your paper thoroughly.

Best wishes
Keely

Dear Authors,

Many thanks for taking the time to address the comments of the various reviewers. Having read the tracked-changes version of the paper and your responses I am satisfied that you have addressed all of the main points, or suitably justified where you haven't made changes (e.g. some suggestions around order of methods / results etc).

In have also read through the "clean" version of your paper, and have annotated where there are inconsistencies in tense, plural vs singular, and issues with spaces around numbers and units and/or indenting of new paragraphs! When you open the attached file it will look like there is a LOT to be done, but I can assure you it will be a very quick job to tidy up the remaining issues (which are purely editing, not any issues with the quality of the science or the written work).

As such, I have marked these as "technical corrections" - this means I do not need to check that these have been done, but they absolutely must be completed (unless I have made an error in some of my suggestions - which is entirely possible in some instances, and where I am unsure I have highlighted these so you may cross check!)

So once again, thank you for your patience and work in producing this paper. I look forward to seeing it in print.

Best wishes
Keely